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The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in school curriculum. To what extend do you agree or disagree.

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Obesity is a common problem among youngsters today, due to the habit of eating junk food and lack of
excercise
the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit
exercise
. In order to tackle the problem, some people state that physical
education
 should be introduced in
school
. I completely agree, that physical
excercise
the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit
exercise
 should be integrated
in
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into
school
 curriculum,
reasons
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the reasons
 for which, I shall give
further
 in the essay. In recent times, children are spending more
time
 on their screens and less
time
 is spend playing outdoor sports
therefore
this
 lack of excercise is the cause of children being overweight, thereby by making physical
education
 essential part of
school
 curriculum would mean that the children learn to enjoy outdoor activities from a early stage of life and thereby inculcating good habits among the young.
For
example in
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example, in
 my own
school we
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school, we
 had half an hour of
manadatory
required by rule
mandatory
 sports period.
Also
, another good reason is that, physical
education
 helps identify talented students in the field of sports. Many famous sportsmen /women got selected at
school level
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the school level
 itself to play for big teams. Some people
however
 have an opposing viewpoint, wherein they believe that sports is
waste
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a waste
 of
time
 and schools should be more academic focus rather than wasting
time
 in teaching kids physical
education
. They believe that schools focus on subjects like maths,
pschology
the science of mental life
psychology
, which would help them in their career paths.
However
, having said that, A list universities require the students to not only have excellent scores but
also
 have
well rounded personality
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a well rounded personality
. To conclude, having discussed both the view points, In my opinion physical
education
 is important to be taught to
school
 children in order to encourage good habits from a young age.
Also
, to help develop their skills if they are sports
inclinded
(often followed by 'to') having a preference, disposition, or tendency
inclined
.
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