Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development.

Nowadays, a lot of countries are almost alike because people are now able to buy the same products all over the
world
. Others argue that it brings about a positive outcome in
development while
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development, while
others are of the opinion that it does not help the development of the
world
. Whether or not it does bring about a positive or negative growth in the
world
, I believe it should be considered as a two-way thing,
that is
, it both has
it
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
gain and
also
it has its drawbacks too with these few points I'll be discussing on.
Firstly
,
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
positive aspect is that it encourages unity and generates revenues among individuals of several countries and
this
is achieved through trading.
For example
, if one from Nigeria travels down to China to purchase goods to bring back home to sell,
such
will lodge in a hotel, use transport. All these are ways of generating income for that
country
.
Moreover
, friendship and a bond
is established
Suggestion
are established
between the seller and the buyer. Now when considering the drawbacks, there is the increase in crime rate and possible spread of infections from one
country
to the other.
For example
, an
indigene
a state of extreme poverty or destitution
indigence
of another
country
with a disease common in his or her own
country
and
thus
doesn't really affect the carrier might likely spread to citizens of the
country
visited. In Conclusion, I believe there are more positive benefits if a product can be bought anywhere in the
world
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • globalization
  • diversity
  • homogenization
  • cultural assimilation
  • global connection
  • local businesses
  • economic impact
  • consumerism
  • standardization
  • westernization
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