Some people think that money must be spent on promoting the use of bicycles in cities while others think cities must spend on public transport discuss both views and give your opinion

It is hotly debated, nowadays, in many circles of developing countries that

funds

ought to be consumed to assist in

usage

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the usage

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of cycles in cities which can have a positive impact on the health of citizens

as well as

on the environment,

while

, opponents of

this

view consider that finances ought to be spent on public

transport

.In my opinion, it will be beneficial for the community if they make a habit of using bicycles for their routine

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, but at the same time, the importance of public

transport

cannot be denied in a developing country. On the one hand, public

transport

is important for common

people

for their mobilisation across the city to accomplish important jobs.

this

service is usually provided at the expense of taxes paid by citizens.So the allocation of

funds

for improvements and maintenance of

this

useful commodity is justified with a view to facilitate

people

.

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instance, in my city, thousands of

people

use

Metro

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the Metro

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for

transport

and travel to various places and I

got

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astonished to see the average maintenance cost of

this

service which was beyond over a million per day.So

through

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this

important service, utilized by millions

justify

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the allocation of

funds

for its smooth functioning.

On the other hand

,

deployment

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of

funds

for

usage

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the usage

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of bicycles in the community is considered to be more beneficial in the long run.

Firstly

, resources are required for

purchase

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the purchase

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of these cycles in bulk followed by

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campaign to make

people

aware of

this

important mode of

transport

and its effects on health.

this

exertion will probably benefit

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physical health in many ways, especially

those

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for those

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who spend life in inactivity and

by

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lack of exercise.

secondly

, overutilisation of public

transport

can lead to pollution in the atmosphere by emitting carbon dioxide

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which,

subsequently

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damage to the ozone layer.So resultantly, stamina and exertion through cycling will affect the

people

positively avoiding the hazards posed by public

transport

.Nowadays, in most developed nations, a trend is emerging towards cycling for school and office. In conclusion,

although

the utility of bicycles as

mode

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of

transport

is matchless and undeniable, in my view, and it has a plethora of ramifications,

however

, public

transport

is

also

one of the important aspects of

transport

and travelling whose funding cannot be overlooked.