Some people think that money must be spent on promoting the use of bicycles in cities while others think cities must spend on public transport discuss both views and give your opinion

It is hotly debated, nowadays, in many circles of developing countries that

funds

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ought to be consumed to assist in

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of cycles in cities which can have a positive impact on the health of citizens

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on the environment,

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, opponents of

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view consider that finances ought to be spent on public

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.In my opinion, it will be beneficial for the community if they make a habit of using bicycles for their routine

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, but at the same time, the importance of public

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cannot be denied in a developing country. On the one hand, public

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is important for common

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for their mobilisation across the city to accomplish important jobs.

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service is usually provided at the expense of taxes paid by citizens.So the allocation of

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for improvements and maintenance of

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useful commodity is justified with a view to facilitate

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instance, in my city, thousands of

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use

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for

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and travel to various places and I

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astonished to see the average maintenance cost of

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service which was beyond over a million per day.So

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important service, utilized by millions

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the allocation of

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for its smooth functioning.

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,

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of

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for

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of bicycles in the community is considered to be more beneficial in the long run.

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, resources are required for

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of these cycles in bulk followed by

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campaign to make

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aware of

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important mode of

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and its effects on health.

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exertion will probably benefit

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physical health in many ways, especially

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for those

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who spend life in inactivity and

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lack of exercise.

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, overutilisation of public

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can lead to pollution in the atmosphere by emitting carbon dioxide

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which,

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damage to the ozone layer.So resultantly, stamina and exertion through cycling will affect the

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positively avoiding the hazards posed by public

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.Nowadays, in most developed nations, a trend is emerging towards cycling for school and office. In conclusion,

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the utility of bicycles as

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of

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is matchless and undeniable, in my view, and it has a plethora of ramifications,

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, public

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is

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one of the important aspects of

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and travelling whose funding cannot be overlooked.