Far too little has been done to prevent animals and plants from dying out. Why do people do so little about it? How can the problem be solved.

As it is essential to respect and conserve these flora and fauna,
this
naturally lead
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naturally leads
us to question why the effort to prevent them from going into extinction has been so low. In
this
essay, I will discuss the reasons why man is not doing much to save them and
also
, proffer some possible solutions.
To begin
, the predominant factor is mostly due to greed and unawareness of the importance of the ecosystem.
In
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On
a quest to live very comfortable, human has resulted to poaching of wildlife and sale them in the black market to make money for themselves.
For
example animals
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example, animals
like tigers and crocodiles are being hunted for their skins while elephants are poached for their tusks.
Moreover these
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Moreover, these
plants and animals are
also
used for medical research
thus
leading to
reduction
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a reduction
in their number dramatically.
However
, most people are ignorant of the importance of
this
living things because they fell to understand that we need each other to survive;
hence
continuous deforestation will gradually cause emission of enormous amounts of carbon
dioxide which
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dioxide, which
is one of the major causes of global warming
subsequently
making the earth less habitable to dwell in.
Nevertheless
, there are potential factors to solve
this
problem.
Firstly
, creating awareness of the importance of the ecosystem is very crucial. The youngsters should be taught the necessity of respecting and conserving the nature
from
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of
primary schools.
Secondly
, if possible government should promulgate a law that will see to the protection of these
wildlife thereby
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wildlife, thereby
ensuring they are not tampered with and
finally
, man should
also
be made to know that disrupting the food chain can be detrimental to their very existence unless it is stopped. In conclusion, it is evident that human activities are the major cause of the disappearance of the plant and animals and people are not doing enough to stop it because they are not seeing anything morally wrong
.
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.
Hence
, creating awareness and disciplinary action by the government should be the considered.
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