You want to book a hotel that one of your friends recommended to you for a family holiday at the seaside. Write a letter to the hotel manager to make arrangements. In your letter, ➡️explain what accommodation you require and when you want to stay ➡️ask what will be included in the price ➡️enquire about activities and places of interest near the hotel

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Dear Thompson I hope

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will find

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the

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well I'm writing

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purpose of

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about some awful services which I got from your hotel

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you pointed out "it has

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large system of air conditioning"

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weather was warm and wet, in some moments as needed

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problem in your building is hot water if we wanted to have

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after a busy day but there was

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heated water

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reason I was not able to enjoy from my nights I have chosen

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location because my parents and my friends recommended it I

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I hope you take into consideration and discuss these problems with your group and I absolutely believe you will have solved all issues by the next time Forward to receiving from you Yours sincerely Bill Gates

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greeting and closing

Ensure the greeting and closing are polite and correctly formatted.

single idea per paragraph

Use paragraphs more effectively to separate ideas; currently, ideas are mingled in some paragraphs.

complete response

Clarify your grievances with more specific details to enhance task achievement.

content

You addressed the main issues you had with the hotel effectively.

tone

The letter maintains an overall polite tone throughout, which is commendable.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

162 words

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