You want to book a hotel that one of your friends recommended to you for a family holiday at the seaside. Write a letter to the hotel manager to make arrangements. In your letter, ➡️explain what accommodation you require and when you want to stay ➡️ask what will be included in the price ➡️enquire about activities and places of interest near the hotel

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Dear Sir/Madam

Hello

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Hello,

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manager of

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hotel

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the hotel

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. I was looking for

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apply

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accomodations

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accommodations

accommodation

seaside

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the seaside

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and randomly one of my best friends heard

this

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then

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recommended you to us. For

this

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reason

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reasons

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reasons,

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I want

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you ylto

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ylto

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book one of your rooms.

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addition

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addition,

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I have some questions about your

hotel

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Firstly

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, In our family only 3 people so we need family

accomodation

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accommodation

. It will be great if there

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are

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some kind of extra charges, especially Wi-fi or Playstation. I am going to book

this

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accommodation

accomodation

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accommodation

from

26 th

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26th

June to 2nd July Second of my question about the price. There is written only price but not the things it

include

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includes

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. I wonder to get information about

this

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topic.

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my friend's

suggestion

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suggestion,

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he talked location of

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hotel

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the hotel

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. And he said ''It

locate

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is located

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beyond

seaside

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the seaside

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''. I have no idea about activities and places of interest near the

hotel

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For

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this

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reason, it

get

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gets

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so good if you

take

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get

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information about some enjoyments,

for

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instance

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instance,

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boat

trip

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trips

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, tennis or playgrounds near there Thank for all in advance. I look forward to your reply. Kind regards Odilova Abduvali

uluga2002Tue Apr 01 2025

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coherence and cohesion

Try to organize your thoughts more clearly; separate the different topics into individual paragraphs to improve structure.

task achievement

Make sure to use a more formal greeting, such as 'Dear Hotel Manager,' instead of 'Hello manager of hotel.'

coherence and cohesion

Be mindful of spelling and grammatical errors (e.g., 'accommodations' instead of 'accomodations', and 'there is some kind of extra charges' should be 'there are some extra charges').

task achievement

You effectively expressed your inquiries regarding accommodation, pricing, and local activities, which is essential for the task.

coherence and cohesion

Your friendly and polite closing creates a positive tone in your letter, which is commendable.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
25
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

183 words

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