Some believe that education success is based on good teachers and others believe that it depends upon student’s attitude. Discuss both views and give your opinion with relevant example.

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At present, it is sometimes believed that

success

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studing

reading carefully with intent to remember

studying

standing

is based on superb teachers.

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, there are those who consider that

education

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success

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depends on someone’s attitude. From my point of view, successful

education

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depends on a

person

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this

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essay will discuss

education

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success

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brought about by good teachers, and

secondly

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success

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studing

reading carefully with intent to remember

studying

standing

caused by individual’s attitude.

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the one hand, proponents of

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an approach believe that only

ablosutely

completely and without qualification; used informally as intensifiers

absolutely

superb teachers can improve knowledge of students.

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is because, these teachers more intelligent and knowledgeable.

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, according to recent scientific research have been carried out in Norway, children who studied in schools with more professional teachers pass final exams much

more better

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better

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this

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argument is flawed mainly because of in some

cases students

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cases, students

from schools with low professional teachers pass exams with

exellent

very good;of the highest quality

excellent

results.

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, opponents of

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theory base their opinion on the assumption that a successful educational process depends on a

person

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and I agree. The reason for

this

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is that if someone wants to study greatly he will find golden opportunities for

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. As a consequence,

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persons can reach

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success

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without any teachers at all.

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, looking at the latest Google statistics, a large quantity of

billioners

a very rich person whose material wealth is valued at more than a billion dollars

billionaires

from Forbes list didn’t have teachers and any of them even didn’t

finished

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finish

expresses position, direction or location, or point in time

school. In conclusion, though people may vary their opinions I am totally

convenced

persuaded of; very sure

convinced

that

success

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education

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is based on a

person

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. Any

person

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can be highly

succesful

having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome

successful

successfully

education

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if he will work hardly enough in the long run.

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is due to the fact that only someone makes

himself

that male; objective male pronoun

him

successful while good teachers don’t guarantee perfect

education

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