Some believe that education success is based on good teachers and others believe that it depends upon student’s attitude. Discuss both views and give your opinion with relevant example.

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At present, it is sometimes believed that

success

studing

reading carefully with intent to remember

studying

standing

is based on superb teachers.

However

, there are those who consider that

education

success

depends on someone’s attitude. From my point of view, successful

education

depends on a

person

Firstly

this

essay will discuss

education

success

brought about by good teachers, and

secondly

success

studing

reading carefully with intent to remember

studying

standing

caused by individual’s attitude.

Suggestion

the one hand, proponents of

such

an approach believe that only

ablosutely

completely and without qualification; used informally as intensifiers

absolutely

superb teachers can improve knowledge of students.

This

is because, these teachers more intelligent and knowledgeable.

For example

, according to recent scientific research have been carried out in Norway, children who studied in schools with more professional teachers pass final exams much

more better

Suggestion

better

However

this

argument is flawed mainly because of in some

cases students

Accept comma addition

cases, students

from schools with low professional teachers pass exams with

exellent

very good;of the highest quality

excellent

results.

On the other hand

, opponents of

this

theory base their opinion on the assumption that a successful educational process depends on a

person

and I agree. The reason for

this

is that if someone wants to study greatly he will find golden opportunities for

education

. As a consequence,

such

persons can reach

education

success

without any teachers at all.

For instance

, looking at the latest Google statistics, a large quantity of

billioners

a very rich person whose material wealth is valued at more than a billion dollars

billionaires

from Forbes list didn’t have teachers and any of them even didn’t

finished

Suggestion

finish

expresses position, direction or location, or point in time

school. In conclusion, though people may vary their opinions I am totally

convenced

persuaded of; very sure

convinced

that

success

education

is based on a

person

. Any

person

can be highly

succesful

having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome

successful

successfully

education

if he will work hardly enough in the long run.

This

is due to the fact that only someone makes

himself

that male; objective male pronoun

him

successful while good teachers don’t guarantee perfect

education

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