Some believe that education success is based on good teachers and others believe that it depends upon student’s attitude. Discuss both views and give your opinion with relevant example.

At present, it is sometimes believed that
success
in
studing
reading carefully with intent to remember
studying
standing
is based on superb teachers.
However
, there are those who consider that
education
success
depends on someone’s attitude. From my point of view, successful
education
depends on a
person
.
Firstly
,
this
essay will discuss
education
success
brought about by good teachers, and
secondly
,
success
in
studing
reading carefully with intent to remember
studying
standing
caused by individual’s attitude.
on
Suggestion
On
the one hand, proponents of
such
an approach believe that only
ablosutely
completely and without qualification; used informally as intensifiers
absolutely
superb teachers can improve knowledge of students.
This
is because, these teachers more intelligent and knowledgeable.
For example
, according to recent scientific research have been carried out in Norway, children who studied in schools with more professional teachers pass final exams much
more better
Suggestion
better
.
However
,
this
argument is flawed mainly because of in some
cases students
Accept comma addition
cases, students
from schools with low professional teachers pass exams with
exellent
very good;of the highest quality
excellent
results.
On the other hand
, opponents of
this
theory base their opinion on the assumption that a successful educational process depends on a
person
and I agree. The reason for
this
is that if someone wants to study greatly he will find golden opportunities for
education
. As a consequence,
such
persons can reach
education
success
without any teachers at all.
For instance
, looking at the latest Google statistics, a large quantity of
billioners
a very rich person whose material wealth is valued at more than a billion dollars
billionaires
from Forbes list didn’t have teachers and any of them even didn’t
finished
Suggestion
finish
a
expresses position, direction or location, or point in time
at
school. In conclusion, though people may vary their opinions I am totally
convenced
persuaded of; very sure
convinced
that
success
of
education
is based on a
person
. Any
person
can be highly
succesful
having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome
successful
successfully
in
education
if he will work hardly enough in the long run.
This
is due to the fact that only someone makes
himself
that male; objective male pronoun
him
successful while good teachers don’t guarantee perfect
education
.
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