Some believe that education success is based on good teachers and others believe that it depends upon student’s attitude. Discuss both views and give your opinion with relevant example.
At present, it is sometimes believed that
success
in studing
is based on superb teachers. reading carefully with intent to remember
studying
standing
However
, there are those who consider that education
success
depends on someone’s attitude. From my point of view, successful education
depends on a person
. Firstly
, this
essay will discuss education
success
brought about by good teachers, and secondly
, success
in studing
caused by individual’s attitude.
reading carefully with intent to remember
studying
standing
on
the one hand, proponents of Suggestion
On
such
an approach believe that only ablosutely
superb teachers can improve knowledge of students. completely and without qualification; used informally as intensifiers
absolutely
This
is because, these teachers more intelligent and knowledgeable. For example
, according to recent scientific research have been carried out in Norway, children who studied in schools with more professional teachers pass final exams much more better
. Suggestion
better
However
, this
argument is flawed mainly because of in some cases students
from schools with low professional teachers pass exams with Accept comma addition
cases, students
exellent
results.
very good;of the highest quality
excellent
On the other hand
, opponents of this
theory base their opinion on the assumption that a successful educational process depends on a person
and I agree. The reason for this
is that if someone wants to study greatly he will find golden opportunities for education
. As a consequence, such
persons can reach education
success
without any teachers at all. For instance
, looking at the latest Google statistics, a large quantity of billioners
from Forbes list didn’t have teachers and any of them even didn’t a very rich person whose material wealth is valued at more than a billion dollars
billionaires
finished
Suggestion
finish
a
school.
In conclusion, though people may vary their opinions I am totally expresses position, direction or location, or point in time
at
convenced
that persuaded of; very sure
convinced
success
of education
is based on a person
. Any person
can be highly succesful
in having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome
successful
successfully
education
if he will work hardly enough in the long run. This
is due to the fact that only someone makes himself
successful while good teachers don’t guarantee perfect that male; objective male pronoun
him
education
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