Some people prefer to travel by car while others prefer to take the bicycle. Which of these do you prefer? What are the advantages and disadvantages of traveling by a car and a bicycle?

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Unlike in the past, there are lots of measures for transportation,
such
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as by cars, trains, airplanes, and so on. Vehicles are the
first
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choice for travelling of some people while bicycles do so of others. Cars and bikes have different benefits and drawbacks, both of which are taken into account before purchasing.
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with, the advantages of cars and bicycles are different of course. Obviously, cars are more suitable for long-distance travelling than bikes because of
higher
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high
speed.
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, the former has much bigger space than the latter. In other word, clothes, food, electronic devices, and so on, can be brought for camping or other outdoor activities;
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a small group of people can go to several tourist attractions in their country.
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, cars will lose their some advantages if they are detained in heavy
traffic
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which, in turn, means they will not be capable of driving with their high speed, and time will be wasted regretfully. For environmental aspects, most cars nowadays are still requiring fossil fuel. It is
combusted
a mixture of decaying vegetation and manure; used as a fertilizer
composted
for generating energy and
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carbon dioxide, the most vital greenhouse gas, is produced as a product of the reaction. The huge amount of
this
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gas emitted into the atmosphere leads to the most well-known climate crisis: global warming.
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, one of the advantages of bikes is that they are more convenient for destinations where are not far from
accommodation
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the accommodation
.
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, some people tend to use bicycles to go to buy food from
supermarket
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supermarkets
a supermarket
nearby.
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, bicycles are unlikely to encounter the
traffic
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congestion because of their size; bicycles can travel through a narrow way. The most important benefit of bicycles is no carbon emission. If every
people
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person
employed bikes
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of vehicles,
greenhouse effect phenomenon
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the greenhouse effect phenomenon
would be less severe.
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, they cannot ride with a high velocity and carry out a heavy baggage,
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there is a low possibility to travel to other cities or camping by bikes. To conclude, the benefits of cars are being more comfortable for long-distance journey and having a wide space, whereas their downsides are being able to undergo heavy
traffic
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and emitting carbon dioxide which contributes to more severe global warming. For bicycles, being more suitable for short-distance travelling, wasting less time due to
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congestion, and environmental friendliness are their advantages, but unfortunately, they have a little capacity. I prefer bicycles since their benefits outweigh cars’ drawbacks.
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