The qualities and skills that a person requires to become successful in today’s world cannot be learned at a university or other academic institutions. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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I fully agree with
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statement. It is obvious that to become a successful person in today’s world cannot be learned at a university or other academic institutions.
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of all I would say that
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and understand answer with various examples. Judging from my own experience I can say that universities or other academic institutions do not guarantee that you will get a good knowledge or education. They do not guarantee that you will get brilliant and excellent results if you will study here. Most of all they teach how to pass different exams, tests, reports and so on. Often you do not need to understand some topic, task or questions. You must only do some actions and pass the exam. In conclusion, I would say that if you want to become a successful person in today’s world you must simply want it. It will be enough to achieve
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aim. You are not born a successful man you will become
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kind of person if really want it and do your best for it. And modern technologies only will help you on
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