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Study needs time, peace and comfort, whereas employment needs the same thing. Someone says it is impossible to combine those two because one distracts one another. Do you think this is realistic in our life today?

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Acquiring knowledge requires dedication, focus and an urge to learn new concepts. Some people believe that
this
 tendency of having concentration and comfortability is equally demanded by employees while others deny it. In
this
 essay, I will elucidate arguments that bolster that why employees need complete attention and extreme determination to achieve
desired target
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the desired target
desired targets
 effectively.
To begin
 with, there are many factors which
helps
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help
 to succeed in official goals as well as learning, if done
parallelly
. One of the major reasons is the development of adequate number of distance education
centers
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
 in the recent days. These
classes support in a greater
Accept comma addition
classes, support a greater
classes support a greater
 way to complete any number of courses during employment through online sessions and examinations. It is really an imperative technological development of
this
 era.
For Instance
, recent research article states that, in India the number of post-graduates
is increased
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are increased
 by 18% compared to
last
 5 years and
that is
 specifically through internet
education
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educating
 systems. Despite all the benefits that online education provides, working students might miss their regular classes due to
work
 constraints.
Also
, they might have a diversion from their
work
 during exams that in turn affects
work
 and will end up in monetary loss. To Exemplify, Software Engineers are expected to
work
 round the clock for product deployment to avoid production issues.
Thus
, it is practically difficult to study while employed. To Conclude, though there
are
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is
wide range
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a wide range
 of technology advancements, it is difficult to get back the exhausted valuable time.
Hence
, I believe that serving a company and getting graduated are two distinct areas to put time and efforts on and both at the same time will not be feasible in reality.
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