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Compare the advantage and disadvantage of three of the following ways of learning a foreign language. state which you consider to be the most effective studying on your own taking a lesson with a private tutor taking lesson as a part of a class taking lesson online going to live in a country where the language is spoken

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We are living in the era of an additional
language
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 is necessary to learn as part of a successful career or a business
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especially people from developing countries look forward to the opportunities globally.Many have different approaches to learn the
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language
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language, such
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 as studying online
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 going to the
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 where the
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 is native and studying yourself.The following paragraph will elucidate more on the demerits and merits of these learning methods
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 as the
cost
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 effectiveness of online
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 rather than going to the native speaking
country
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nevertheless
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, in my opinion,
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 would be the most effective
study
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 method. Many choose to
study
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 through online classes.Ostensibly, online classes have myriad of
study
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 materials
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patterns and approaches which can beneficial for students who have basic to advance skills in the
language
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, many contents are free of
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 and we can find native
language
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 experts in online without spending much money.
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YouTube classes are
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 free
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very informative and attractive.
On the other hand
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online classes mostly does not have any access to monitor the student development in the
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 learning process. Another ubiquitous approach is self
study
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. The predominant advantage would be the student will have convenient time and place. They can develop their own pattern and work on it according.
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 the downside would be if a student does not have the perseverance, seeming many drops the learning after some time. Very few
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pupils
 prefer to learn the
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 from a native speaking
country
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.Chiefly
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this
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 approach will have a profound impact on the way they learn due to the fact that they are interacting with the people who speak that
language
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 on a daily
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basis, unlike
 other students
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 they could improve the accent
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style and pattern same as native speakers.
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they can earn the desired money as well once they completed the
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in the recent years after the changes occurred in the Chinese economy, many novices going to America and Britain to learn the English
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 due to
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the popularity
 and demand of
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language
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 in their
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In contrast
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the
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 of
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 approach would be higher compared to all other methods since students need to spend a lot of money for living expenses in that
country
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, having said that the benefits outweigh the disadvantages. To sum up
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perusing a foreign
language
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 other than native
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 would be highly demanding in the new economic conditions in the world.It would act as a catalyst
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for
 a thriving career.There are different methods of learning available on any platform in the current world and in my view immigrating to the native speaking
country
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 would be the most fruitful in
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 regard considering the enormous boons it has brought to the learner.
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