Many people believe that we should protect all wild animals while others believe we should just protect some of them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Despite an extensive and harmful use of fossil fuels in nearly the whole world, many countries promote the use of renewable sources of power. I completely agree that not only should countries enforce ecological laws but they should
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promote them among
citizens
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the citizens
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way to achieve a better environment in the future is to promote eco-friendly laws that force large and small-scale corporations to cut their damage to the environment. Indeed, big corporations and factories are the greatest polluters that definitely need to cut their carbon emissions to maintain the current level of temperature or even reverse global warming.
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, electricity-producing companies start using solar, wind and hydro energy to cut their corruption of the air. Having done that, nearly seven hundred billion tons of carbon dioxide may be decreased yearly. A prime example of
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may be the countries of the European
Union which
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Union, which
enacted laws of
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kind and made their air absolutely cleaner than it used to be ten years ago. Little do countries understand the importance of agitating eco-friendly lifestyle among the common people.
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, 60% of the pollution is created by common citizens that exploit
cars
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the cars
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of bicycles or do not save electric energy.
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, being the only carbon-negative country, Bhutan only promoted the ecological lifestyle among its people and succeeded to even change their mindset.
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, the citizens put solar panels and wind-powered stations
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of usual coal electric stations to power their houses. In conclusion, I firmly agree that if it were not for the promotion of a clean environment among corporations and common people, it would be impossible to develop a healthy future for the Earth so it is an advantageous strategy.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • ecosystem
  • conservation status
  • ecological significance
  • holistic approach
  • endangered species
  • natural heritage
  • unforeseen negative impacts
  • economically non-viable
  • prioritization
  • ecosystem balance
  • conservation efforts
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