Some people prefer to raise children in the cities while others believe that children should be raised in the countryside. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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it is sometimes argued that children should be

bring

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brought

up in the rural areas, there are those who believe that metropolitan areas provide more benefits for them. In my opinion, cities

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are

the best places

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for

growing up youngsters owing to the golden opportunity to obtain

the high

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the highest

quality

education

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while the effect of the proximity to nature is insignificant. There is a widespread belief that parents ought to raise their children in a rural environment owing to the vicinity of nature. By spending a lot of time outside, young people could breathe fresh air and lead an active lifestyle. Not only will

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help to avoid

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physical health problems

a physical health problem

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as obesity, but

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lifestyle will

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prevent mental diseases,

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as depression.

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, nowadays there are plenty of green areas in cities and the environmental concern allow children to be outdoors as often as in the suburban areas. Having carried out a survey, Moscow ecologists have revealed that park zones in the city increase in 50 percent for 10 years. Those who argue that youngsters should be upbringing in urban areas base their opinion on the opportunity to obtain

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an excellent education

education

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. I agree with

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because only when parents think about choosing schools for their children do they realize that city’s teachers have

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a higher level

higher levels

of professionalism and can develop children’ soft skills which extremely significant in the long run.

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, young people might be

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offering

prospective jobs with competitive salary than their suburban peers. According to London

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association, urban students in 5

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times, often

gain job offers than countryside’s youth owing to their communication skills. In conclusion, while people may vary in their opinions, I am firmly convinced that children should be upbringing in cities because of having quality

education

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which will

beneficial

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benefit

in the future.