Many people are copying famous celebrities from magazines and TV. Why is this happening? Do you think it’s good idea to copy celebrities?

In many parts of the

world it’s

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world, it’s

often seen that many people who are a fan of famous celebrities try to copy their characters or other sides of them. It’s

common

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a common problem

problem

today that our children who are around 8-12 years old are always able to be like famous people that they watched on

TV

saw

give an exhibition of to an interested audience

show

on journals.

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seen, it’s

quite

true but

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true, but

according to the world, there are many sides of

this

happening.

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the advantages

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disadvantages and

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disadvantages, and

both sides of the

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Firstly

, it must be recognised that if people try to copy many popular celebrities it would change his or her

worldview

to goodness. In

this

case, I strongly agree with

this

idea. Take Steave

Jobs

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Jobs, for

for example

. He was one of the richest

man

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men

in the world. Or take Bill Gates for

other

any of various alternatives; some other

another

instance. They were the most

succesful

having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome

successful

people in the planet cause of their individuality and characteristics.

This

is the strongest evidence of my opinion.

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example clearly shows that if people is showing on

TV

or in many different magazines are

succesful

having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome

successful

, clever or capable with any

abilites it

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abilities, it

abilities it

must always be copied by other human who is trying to be like him or her.

On the other hand

, there are some disadvantage sides of

this

.

For example

, there are more people who play many roles for different

adveritemens

on

TV

other watching lines than people who play roles for educational

characterical

programs. So,

this

is a big reason that I disagree with

this

side of the

problem

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They all change human’s mind and their

capebility

the quality of being capable -- physically or intellectually or legally

capabilities

all

exept

take exception to

except

clever

billioners

the number that is represented as a one followed by 9 zeros

billions

, genius and businessmen. Nowadays, there are many factories which are making lots of fake

adversitements

a public promotion of some product or service

advertisements

on

TV

to multiply the number of their unreal products. So, after that while children watching

TV

, they seen famous person who is using low-quality products that they

adversited

called to public attention

advertised

for big money. After all children

wil

the capability of conscious choice and decision and intention

will

be fussy and demand their parents to buy these fake products to be alike famous people that they saw on

TV

or journal. I strongly disagree with

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this

their

side of the

problem

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conclution

a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration

conclusion

, according to the goodness of

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I think it depends on people who is copying famous celebrities and person who is being copied with his or her popular quality.