Many people are copying famous celebrities from magazines and TV. Why is this happening? Do you think it’s good idea to copy celebrities?

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In many parts of the

world it’s

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world, it’s

often seen that many people who are a fan of famous celebrities try to copy their characters or other sides of them. It’s

common

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a common problem

problem

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today that our children who are around 8-12 years old are always able to be like famous people that they watched on

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saw

give an exhibition of to an interested audience

show

on journals.

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seen, it’s

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true, but

according to the world, there are many sides of

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happening.

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essay will discuss

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the advantages

disadvantages and

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disadvantages, and

both sides of the

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Fristly

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Firstly

, it must be recognised that if people try to copy many popular celebrities it would change his or her

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to goodness. In

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case, I strongly agree with

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idea. Take Steave

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. He was one of the richest

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men

in the world. Or take Bill Gates for

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instance. They were the most

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having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome

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people in the planet cause of their individuality and characteristics.

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is the strongest evidence of my opinion.

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example clearly shows that if people is showing on

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or in many different magazines are

succesful

having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome

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abilities, it

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must always be copied by other human who is trying to be like him or her.

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, there are some disadvantage sides of

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other watching lines than people who play roles for educational

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programs. So,

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They all change human’s mind and their

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the quality of being capable -- physically or intellectually or legally

capabilities

all

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take exception to

except

clever

billioners

the number that is represented as a one followed by 9 zeros

billions

, genius and businessmen. Nowadays, there are many factories which are making lots of fake

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a public promotion of some product or service

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

389 words

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Many people are copying famous celebrities from magazines and TV. Why is this happening? Do you think it’s good idea to copy celebrities?

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Many people believe that today there is a general increase in anti-social behavior and lack of respect for others. What might have caused this situation? What solutions can you suggest?

some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Successful companies use advertising to make more sales. What can make advertisement effective? Do you think advertisement is a bad thing or a good thing for society.

The funds for postgraduate research are limited; therefore some people think that the government should provide financial support. In their opinion, only scientific research should be funded, rather than other less useful subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many believe that modern technology has brought people together, but others say that it has driven us apart. Discuss both viewpoints and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.