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Organized tour to remote areas and community is increasingly popular. Is it a positive or negative development for the local people and the environment?

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In the modern era, the issue of local
tour
 has become highly controversial. There are those who say that the local
tour
 is negative for countryside people and the
environment
Accept comma addition
environment, however
however
, others believe that it should not. In
this
 essay,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 will examine both sides arguments and provide my overall opinion. Generally speaking, there are two main reasons why people believe that government municipalities should prevent to
tour
 in the national
place
. Perhaps there
are
Suggestion
is
 the main reason why people are in
favor
promote over another
favour
 of
this
 phenomenon is that these days, many national
place
 was opened than that was destroyed because of the visitor. Some people visit the
tour
 area and they do not pick up their trash.
This
 situation leads to destroy the environment. A
further
 point in favour of
tour
Suggestion
a tour
 in the local
place
, if local
place
 develops to
tour
 location, people can get noise pollution from
visitor
Suggestion
visitors
the visitor
.
In addition
, their site will be changed to trash and noisy
place
 like
shopper market
Suggestion
the super market
the shopper market
. Despite, these challenges, there are several arguments against
this
.
Firstly
, the are developing about
tour
 location, people who live in national
place
 will get more profits.
For example
, visitor come in to the area than they eat some food, hang out in the
place
 and found local food or gift. In conclusion, it is clear
this
 is a topic which very relevant to modern society. Some point will better for local people,
however
,
this
 situation will keep going than the environment will destroyed. National
place
 is very important to people.
In addition
, people will must keep our local area.
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