The government should control the use of the internet in a country

In
this
modern era, the
internet
development is getting stronger, and at the same time, access to it is
also
getting wider and easier. Everyone can give and get the
information
they need as well as to communicate with people around the
world
very quickly. It feels like the
world
no longer has a border when it comes to the
internet
.
Thus
, when someone is surfing on the
internet
, it
also
feels like surfing on earth since they can look into whatever they want as if they are going for travelling around the earth.
However
, some places are not always in the same circumstances; there are places that full of peace and places that are advantaged to be a war ground.
Therefore
, it is crucial to restrict the cyberspace in order to protect and make sure that everyone is safe when they surf around the web.
Hence
the ministry should take action to discipline the cyber management in the
country
. Unfortunately, at the same time, some people do not want to be controlled while using the
internet
because it will disturb their freedom on the
internet
.
This
essay will compare the reasons, whether the ministry should take control or
instead
give flexibility to the
use
of the network in a
country
.
First
, there are several reasons why governments want to take control of the
internet
. One of them is to avoid the "hoax" news trend in public. Hoax news is a kind of
information
that does not match with reality. Since cyberspace lets everyone has access to spread the
information
,
such
conditions will allow some people who are not responsible enough to spread lies with various purposes. Beside hoax news, several important data may threaten the
country
if it is being leaked;
thus
, the
country
needs to protect the data.
As a result
, that data protection will prevent the
country
from external and internal threats—
besides
, some contents in the
World
Wide Web do not seem to be appropriate enough to be accessed in some countries based on the cultures and principles held by the majority of the people. More importantly, crime can be found in all aspects including on
internet
Suggestion
the internet
or what it is usually called as cybercrime. Several cyber crimes that have been done by hackers are
such
as stealing money, sharing illegal content, hacking, and data theft.
Therefore
, the
government
takes action by controlling the
use
of the
internet
by blocking several websites so that the citizens could be protected from any crimes that are done through the
internet
. Despite the importance of controlling the
world
wide web as what has been mentioned above, some people still think that the
government
should not restrict a person's privilege, especially for the cyber. It is because the
internet
is a personal consumption in the
first
place, and
hence
it is the responsibility of the individual to handle their online network, without being restricted by the rule. Another reason is that
this
digital era has given data to civilization without restriction
thus
people do not want to be limited to get the knowledge that they want to get like what had happened to them in decades.
Furthermore
, people
also
tend to have a high curiosity about something
that is
happening in
this
world
. Without that limitation, people will try to search and gather all the data available so they can find out the truth and compare it with their points of view.
Lastly
, freedom of speech is something that needs to be preserved by the
government
because people may have many opinions or data about things that are needed to be known by people around the
world
.
However
, some of that
information
can be marked as a hoax by the ministry, which has been caught several times incorrectly filtering the data.
For example
, Reddit is a website forum aimed to discuss many things and share much useful
information
.
This
site is a centre of
information
and entertainment for the people in Indonesia.
However
, Reddit was blocked in Indonesia because it contained pornography in one of its sub-forums. The authority department
that is
in charge to take control has a blocking machine against issues of pornography and things that are inappropriate to consume, especially for those who are still underage.
However
, the purpose of the blocking is still not quite right.
Consequently
, some people think their rights are limited by the
government
. In conclusion, the
government
needs to revise the rules so that it can still be able to protect the citizen, but at the same time,
also
do not restrict them. It is
also
important for the
government
to not easily blocking several sites just because it has some inappropriate contents on it.
Moreover
, the
government
also
needs to be more consistent towards the rule of the
use
of computerization. The
government
needs to realize that they have to stop randomly blocking the
internet
just because of the several issues that are happening,
such
as during Revormasi Dikorupsi protest months ago. The generation has been changed, and all of the things are now digitalised. So the
internet
, as a medium of
information
and communication that connects the whole
world
, should not be controlled too tightly because it can cause restrictions on human rights, including the freedom of speech. If the user can handle the
internet
properly, the bad impact of using the
internet
can be reduced.
However
, those negative effects are somehow still avoidable and preventable because it depends on the user itself. Giving a proper education regarding the
use
and ethics of the
internet
need to be given by the
government
;
thus
, they could prevent the
internet
from falsely used by some criminals.
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