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Band 7.5

Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter • explain the reasons for the noise • apologise • describe what action you will take Write at least 150 words

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Dear Sam, Hope you are doing well, I received your letter, and I wholeheartedly apologise for the disturbance and inconvenience caused to you by the noise which is coming from my apartment. I am aware that we have not known each other much lately as I recently moved in into the flat
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 to you. And the place where I reside is old and outdated
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 why it needed some renovation, and
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 why some construction
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 is happening that has lead to some noises. I have taken your request under consideration, and I have come up with some solutions that there will be a fixed number of hours of
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. It will be from 10;00 in the morning to 1;00 in the afternoon.
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, I have instructed my technicians to
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 carefully and try to make
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 noise as possible. I expect the restoration
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 will be completed by the upcoming week. I request you to cooperate for a few more days. Yours sincerely, Chandni Desai
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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