Being a celebrity – such as a famous film star or sports personality – brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?
It is considered that the celebrities of film or sports have more merits than problems in their activity.
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essay will discuss on both sides and gives an opinion why they have more advantages of being a famous one.
To commence with, well known persons have their own images in the society, so it's given them, their new identity once they get success in their field. Linking Words
For instance
, Rajesh Hamal, the famous actor of Nepal is well known all over the country as a best actor so he has his own images. Linking Words
Moreover
, they have their high standard of living in comparison to the other people who are not illustrious. Because they have all sorts of amenities Linking Words
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as own house, car and servant to take care of them, which has made their life luxurious. That's why when the people become celebrities, they can have luxurious as well as their own identity which is advantages of being famous.
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However
, in other hand, some time they have to face with the issues, which might be difficult to handle. As, we are human beings, they are not perfect in everything so sometime they might do mistake, Linking Words
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as when giving speaking might be some error can occur. In that case, it's taken has a big deal, which very depressing for them. Linking Words
Furthermore
, they don't have more privacy as the media and people are always around them to know their each and every Linking Words
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action which might make them trivial to adjust. To exemplify, Linking Words
last
year, One of the famous sportsman, Hamish of Nepal celebrities got divorced with her wife and these news every time flash in media like TV, newspaper, radio and so on which bad effects on their growth. That's why it's very hard to have a privacy exercise in the case of celebrities of film or sports.
To sum up, on one hand, being celebrities can put the people in tough movement as they don't have enough privacy lifestyle while, Linking Words
on the other hand
, they have more merit than demerits. They will get name and fame as well as lots of love and affection and respect from people which are priceless. So, I think being celebrities are more beneficial.Linking Words
Submitted by Sabu on
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