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With the improvements in today’s health care, society has to care for more and more elderly people. Do you feel that society will be able to cope with the increase in numbers of elderly people today and how can it be managed? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

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The line graph and table compare the average temperatures per month and the total annual hours of sunshine in London, New York and Sydney respectively. From the overall respectively, it is clear that New York and London had a similar pattern in the average monthly temperatures. And they had the same figures between March and April and
on
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in
 November.
On
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In
 January, Sydney had the highest
amount
with
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to
by
 just over 25
% while
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%, while
 had the lowest
amount
on
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in
 July compared with
other two countries
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the other two countries
.
However
, from July to December, the
proportion
 of Sydney had risen constantly, reaching at 25%.
Besides
 London and New York had declined
to
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in
 the
proportion
 of January in the same period.
Furthermore
, Sydney and New York had bigger figures with 2,473 and 2,535 respectively than London with only 1,180 The line graph and table compare the average temperatures per month and the total annual hours of sunshine in London, New York and Sydney respectively. From the overall respectively, it is clear that New York and London had a similar pattern in the average monthly temperatures. And they had the same figures between March and April and
on
Suggestion
in
 November.
On
Suggestion
In
 January, Sydney had the highest
amount
with
Suggestion
to
by
 just over 25
% while
Accept comma addition
%, while
 had the lowest
amount
on
Suggestion
in
 July compared with
other two countries
Suggestion
the other two countries
.
However
, from July to December, the
proportion
 of Sydney had risen constantly, reaching at 25%.
Besides
 London and New York had declined
to
Suggestion
in
 the
proportion
 of January in the same period.
Furthermore
, Sydney and New York had bigger figures with 2,473 and 2,
535 respectively
Accept comma addition
respectively, than
than London with only 1,180
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