News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported?

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An individual can be updated by observing their surroundings what is going on currently in all over the world and all these kinds of information are provided by newspapers or television.

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essay will reveal both the aspects of news which are decided by News editors and how bad news influence the life of common man. According to me, it would definitely a better choice for more good news would be reported rather than bad one. To embark with, articles which are shown in newspapers or broadcasting by News editors in

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modern society are not up to the mark because they are under political pressure so that they can only express the positive side of the party.

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, the crimes like murder, robbery are increasing day by day and it becomes the responsibility of the reviser to spread these kind of content to alert the public. To exemplify, nowadays, A disease named Corona which is very dangerous and infectious too, and the people came to know about

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by reading the daily articles in the paper or in the T.V. News.

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, people

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become habitual to watch the bad news because it seems interesting to them, Apart from

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can negatively affect the children and youngsters as they can try to commit these kind of harmful crimes.

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, it would definitely change the thinking of masses if the news printers report positive material and scatter around the world. Admittedly, TRP is

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a major reason behind the news companies and they just want to increase the TRP so that they sometimes transmit irrelevant content which can mislead the folks.

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, the data shown by different news channels were not same as they want to compete

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a daily or weekly publication on folded sheets; contains news and articles and advertisements

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have to show the content with proper evidences and they should broadcast good things rather than

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News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported?

Your opinion

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eople are living in a “throwaway society”, using things for a short time and then throwing them away. What are the causes of this? What problems does it lead to?