20. Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

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Nowadays, the growth in

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and pollution are the main problem the world is facing. Some people think that

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the rise

a rise

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a certain extent

, I agree that it will solve the issues while there are

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the rise

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prices may not be the best way to reduce congestion problems. If the

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prices increase, there will be less people who can afford it, which means only

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a few people

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, there will be less congestion on roads and less pollution.

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, in Mumbai, many people can’t afford the fuel prices and they drive less.

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, the rise in the fuel prices will result in

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an increase

in prices of food, clothing, etc., which will affect

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the common man

because most of the industries depend on the

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prices.

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, there could be other solutions to improving

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jam

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as increasing public transportation to encourage more people to

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it and making it better.

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, increasing the frequency of public transport during peak hours with cheap tickets can help individuals to

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it more frequently as well as adding it from various locations at peoples’ convenience can benefit everyone.

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, more the number of bus stops in the community encourages adults and children to

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the bus

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of driving. Another solution is to add some charge in populated areas when using cars to discourage people

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have no

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zones in city

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. To conclude, solving

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and

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pollution

problems by increasing

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the price

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is not an effective

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rather improve public transportation in all areas so that people

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it more than driving.

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