In some areas of the US, a curfew is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of the doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?

A
curfew
is imposed in some areas of the US and teenagers are not allowed to be out of the doors at night after a particular time unless accompanied by an adult. According to me the
curfew
is reasonable and it should be followed by the teenagers. The
curfew
is imposed for the safety and well being of the
teenagers
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teenagers, although
although
if an emergency occurs
example any
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example, any
hospital emergency they can be attended
with
Suggestion
by
an adult along. Another,
illustration
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an illustration
I can think of is when I was in Australia similar
curfew
was imposed by the government
where
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
were
in a complete lockdown of the country was
antisipated
expected hopefully
anticipated
so as to avoid the
pandamic
epidemic over a wide geographical area
pandemic
virus that was spreading all over the country. End of the day we need to abide by the rules for the safety and well being of our own and our family.
However
, it is not a complete lockdown for a week or a month
besides
, only
certian
definite but not specified or identified
certain
areas in the US are under restriction and its laid only in the night at a particular time.
Therefore
, I
dont
do not
don't
' think the teenagers will lose
thier
of them or themselves
their
freedom or independence. Usually, some of them would want to party at a resto bar or move around the city on a long drive or even grab a coffee at the nearest cafe.
However
, these things can be
certanily
definitely or positively ('sure' is sometimes used informally for 'surely')
certainly
avoided and house parties can still happen and most of them would prefer home parties these days. To recapitulate, according to my opinion the "
curfew
" is reasonable and everyone need to abide by the law if the situations
calls
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call
for it for the safety and security of the teenagers and they would not be allowed outside unless
accompained
having companions or an escort
accompanied
by an adult.
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  • enforce
  • juvenile
  • repercussions
  • autonomy
  • adolescence
  • paternalistic
  • delinquency
  • municipality
  • ordinance
  • authoritarian
  • peer pressure
  • social dynamics
  • civil liberties
  • community policing
  • preventative measures
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