Some systems require students to speacialize in a limited range of subjects from the age of fifteen. Other systems require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school? What are the benefits of two education systems and what is better ? You should write at least 250 words.

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different systems require students to

study

many subjects when they still in school and other systems require only

limit

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limited

subjects.

However

, the question is what are of

two systems

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the two systems

would be

the more benefitical

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more beneficial

the more beneficial

and better than. In

this

essay

,

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I am going to argue what is the best system There are many people believe let students to

speacilize

become more focus on an area of activity or field of study

specialize

specialise

specializes

in

limit

range

of

subject

that let students memorize more knowledge and make them to

deside

reach, make, or come to a decision about something

decide

their future

subject

early and know specific details about what

yhey

people in general

they

going to

study

.

In addition

, give students more freedom to choose what they prefer to

study

. In fact, students who prefer scientific subjects to historical subjects.

Moreover

, students can focus on the essential

subject

which they need to complete

school s

an educational institution

schools

materials. To illustrate, all students need to learn maths and others basic substance. There are some systems give students specific plan to follow it.

On the other hand

, many individuals consider that permit students

study

wide

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a wide range

range

of material till

them

people in general

they

graduate make students think strongly and have significant knowledge. Frist, let students aware amount information

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on

many

subject

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subjects

that will allow them to really know what they will face in educational life and university.

For instance

, they might be knowing every type of

scientific

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scientific subjects

a scientific subject

subject

, what is the difference of them and how they are beginning.

Second

, studying

wide

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a wide range

range

of subjects is leading students' memory can acquire large information in smell period.

Although

studying significant of subjects while students are in school is amazing strategy, maybe

students

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students'

loss their concentration due to the big knowledge which they would acquire To sum up,

this

essay has discussed the benefit of two educational systems. In the systems require

to speacialize

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specialized

to specializes

to specialize

to specialise

in

limit

subject

side, they

believe will

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believe, will

know specific information and their future

subject

. In the systems require

wide

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a wide range

range

of

subject

side, they might know every type of

subject

and what are the difference of many subjects. The systems which are

requiring

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required

to

speacialize

become more focus on an area of activity or field of study

specialize

specially

limit

subject

is better than

other

any of various alternatives; some other

another

.