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Some people believe that smart phones are destroying social interaction today. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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According to some people's opinion, advanced technologies like smart phones are becoming
severe
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more severe
 and demolishing interactions among society. At
this
 point, I think it is equally positive and disadvantageous, because it links the whole world while decreasing face-to-face meetings. From one perspective, in these days countries are bordered and to get there it demands fund which is rip-off.
As a result
, people have invented technologies to organise on-line get
togethers
in contact with each other or in proximity
together
 with families.
For instance
, with the help of instant messengers like "Whatsapp" or "Skype" acquaintances live in
different hemisphere
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different hemispheres
a different hemisphere
 of Earth will probably make video calls. They are highly likely to be blown away by
this
 and
this
 would not cost them an arm and a leg. Due to
pandemic
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the pandemic
pandemics
a pandemic
 of Coronavirus, today everyone has to stay home and those
abovementioned
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above mentioned
 programmes are helping us to see our family members.
However
, if these smart phones are not used in
right way
Suggestion
the right way
, their users are prone to be cut from the reality.
Instead they
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Instead, they
 would find befriended people in their virtual world.
Moreover
,
this
 is not
sole case
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the sole cause
the sole case
 to think badly about
implications
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the implications
 of smart phones. For the most parts, in normal
cases some
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cases, some
 people give negative attitudes towards visiting houses of their family members. They will probably call them and continue their doings. Even in some cities, people are becoming strangers with their neighbours because of effects of gadgets. Due to
this
, most of them become slaves of their smart phones, I believe. To conclude, deducing smart phones as positive or negative, it would be insensible, because it depends on their users, in my view.
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