Governments should spend more money on medical research and less on researching the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

More fund is invested

into

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in

research in terms of

medicine

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,

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, the opposite is spent on environmental research. I am not in agreement with

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path, because new incurable diseases and climate changes can destroy the economy of those countries who subsidize only

medicine

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. It is obvious that, most of countries invest researchers in

medical field

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the medical field

to find the measures of dangerous

illneses

impairment of normal physiological function affecting part or all of an organism

illness

.

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,

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can be negative development, because almost all of the diseases spread due to negligence towards nature globally.

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, people can be infected by respiratory viruses when they are inhaling the air in toxic areas.

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, they can infect other people,

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government

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the government

could not cease the spread of diseases. In Japan equal quantity of

fund

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the fund

funds

is given to protect

environment

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the environment

and develop the

medicine

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. By doing

so they

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so, they

have achieved to avoid

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problem. On top of the

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, if money is not directed into looking after the nature, it is highly likely to emerge garbage hills. As an outcome there might be noxious elements that would bring impacts on climate.

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, if these dangerous substances transform into the shape of

fluid

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the fluid

it could harm water and its bodies living there. I think, it would be sensible to dispose those rubbish and make eco-friendly zones to make more oxygen

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The China based survey conducted by experts from Europe and Asia

shown

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has shown

is shown

showed

that after taking care of

enviromental

of or relating to the external conditions or surroundings

environmental

settings, the level of detrimental gases

have dropped

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has dropped

until

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by

to

28% in 2012. To conclude,

while most of people

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while most people

arguing on

funding whether

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funding, whether

medicine

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or

environment

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the environment

, I am convinced to protect the nature. By doing so we can ease the work of people who are working in the field of

medicine

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