many people are copying the famous celebrities from magazines and TV Why is this happening ? Do you think it is a good idea to copy celebrities ?
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. The experiments conducted by University of New York gained information about alteration in Linking Words
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psychology. According to its findings, every other 3 pupil in school started to smoke due to imitating celebrities from films.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite