Many young people now know more about international pop and movie stars than famous people in the history of their countries. What are the causes? Give solutions to increase the number of people to know about famous people in history.
It is a fact that in today's world, the youth is inclined to have a predilection for global culture and celebrities
instead
of local historical figures
. Several factors are leading to this
and effective solutions should be suggested to prevent this
issue. It is possibly said that issue
can be caused by some main factors. One of the main reasons is that the proliferation of social media has aroused a sense of Correct article usage
the issue
interest
with
famous people in the young generation. Change preposition
in
This
is an indicator that celebrities' private lives are grabbing the headlines of newspapers and online paper
, contemporaneously, youngsters are investing the majority of their time surfing the Internet. Fix the agreement mistake
papers
Hence
, they are exposed to stories about such
public figures
frequently. Another cause is that the teaching method of history in most school
nowadays is tedious and unattractive. Fix the agreement mistake
schools
Therefore
, students usually do not find it intriguing and inspiring enough to sustain studying, which has led to them having limited knowledge about either historical events or people. Some solutions can be implemented to spur young people's interest
in their country's historical figures
. First,
influencers and filmmakers are incentivized to produce history-based movies and contents
. The remarkable success and influence on Vietnamese youngsters from Fix the agreement mistake
content
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produce
videos based on real historical events, can exemplify Change the verb form
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this
. A second measure would be to tailor the teaching method of history to rekindle students' interest
and engagement in the lesson. For example
, weaving anecdotes into lessons would be a great attention-grabber, thereby enabling the students to absorb these wearisome knowledge
in a more natural and palatable way. In conclusion, the issue of the young generation showing Change the determiner
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interest
in historical figures
in the country and have
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