Traditions are about the past and innovation is about the future, and it has been argued that we need to let go of traditions for the sake of progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this? What role should traditions have in our lives?

Nowadays, many people are not following traditions and more involved in innovative progress. Some people believe, that it is the right course to let traditions disappear. From my point of view, traditions must be followed despite the rapid growth of
innovation
.
To begin
with, traditions have been passed from
generation
to
generation
for a thousand years. It is not only beliefs but
also
previous experience. Take,
for example
, superstitious, that if birds are flying near to the ground, It would be rain. Or other signs that hardly can be explained by science.
That is
reason, it is important to keep follow traditions, it contains all history of the
generation
.
To begin
, with the growth of
innovation
, traditions are losing the power of believers. And now it is not priorities in peoples' lives. But it is important to follow the key holiday celebration and holy days in the national tradition.
For instance
, the Chinese are celebrating their new year in February, while the rest of the globe celebrating in another day in December. Keeping follows traditions help us to remember who we are and where we are coming from.
As a result
,
innovation
erases all difference between nations
that is
a significant part of humans. Taking everything into consideration, in my opinion, traditions are highly important for the future of the nations as it keeps secrets of the previous
generation
and has to be present in our lives, as a reminder of our roots and history of a nation. While
innovation
is clearing all difference between nation, that does not give a positive impact to new generations.
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