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total world population in 4 countries in 1950 and 2003, and projections for 2050. <br> <br> Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.<br> <br>

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From the figure it is clearly depicted that in 1950, China had the most percentage of
population
, nearly 25% of total world&apos;s
population
. Whereas India was
on
Suggestion
in
 the
second
 position with almost 15% contribution in world&apos;s
popultion
the people who inhabit a territory or state
population
. USA and Japan had very less world&apos;s
population
 contribution which is almost 8% and 4% respectively in 1950. <br> Significantly, the trend has changed in 2002, in which China controlled its
population
 growth and come to 20% from 23%.
Similarly
Accept comma addition
Similarly, population
population
 of
USA
Suggestion
the USA
 and Japan
also
 decreased.
On the contrary
,
population
Suggestion
the population
 of India has increased from 15% to almost 18%.<br> <br> In the 2050, it is estimated that India will follow the same rising trend in
population
&apos;s growth. While the other countries will control it and reduce
thier
of them or themselves
their
population
.
However
, Japan will
remarkabely
to a remarkable degree or extent
remarkably
 reduce its
population
growth which
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growth, which
 will only be 1-2% of total world&apos;s
population
.<br> <br>
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