Some people believe money is the best gift for teenegers, while others disagree. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

The differences between nations in terms of their
lifestyle
, food habit,
fashion, choices
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fashion choices,
and traditions have already reduced to a great extent
with
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by
the effects of globalisation, technology and international agreements for open trade facilities. Since most of the international products are easily accessible globally, people have far more choices and freedom which have enhanced people's
lifestyle
besides
narrowing the gaps among nations. I postulate
this
trend a positive development and the reasons are explained in
this
essay.
To begin
with, the availability of international brands like Apple, Google, Nike, Pepsi, Johnson's, Samsung, Amazon, Toyota etc.
in
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In
a country enables consumers to purchase quality products.
For instance
, someone in India can use the same technological products from Intel and Microsoft that an American
uses
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use
user
and it facilitates reducing gaps between these two countries. 'Barrier & gaps' among nations was a predominant reason for conflicts and with the advancement of the technology and mutual trade agreements, nations are aware of the foreign cultures more than they did ever before.
This
diminishes the world tension and helps prevail the peace.
Furthermore
, affluent countries have created a vast market for the consumer products and
this
has helped them establish offshore offices and factories in developing nations.
This
is a mutually beneficial agreement that helps both parties.
Furthermore
, local consumers are not trapped with the low-quality local products and a wider freedom lets them enjoy a better
lifestyle
. With the competition, local manufacturers are forced to produce quality products at a competitive price. With
this
development, some local companies have gained international recognition as a manufacturer. To conclude, the concept of boundaries and countries divides nations and create the master-slave relationship as we have already witnessed in the history. The present era has plummeted
this
heinous trend to a great extent and the similar
lifestyle
and availability of international products have helped
this
to happen.
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