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Some people think that it should be compulsory for people to retake their driving test every 5 years. What are the advantages and disadvantages of doing this?

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It’s common today creasing number of people who aren’t sure
that is
 it compulsory for them to resolve their driving licence each 5 years or not yet.
This
 essay will discuss both sides of
this
 problem and
also
 supports advantages and disadvantages parts of
this
.
Firstly
, it must be recognized as one of the principal advantage is that there are lots new rules are introduced by the government and they all should be well-known for all people. Unfortunately, nowadays not every person knows where is the latest and strongly news or rule about the retaking the driving test every 5 years. In case,
this
 environment would bring many hard accidents for humans.
Moreover
, if people pass the driving exam each 5 years, it would probably decrease the number of mishaps in our life.
On the other hand
, there are some disadvantages of
this
. I strongly appreciate that the main disadvantage is will be about retaking auto-test follower’s numbers.
This
 means every 5 years more and more drivers retake their tests and take lots of licences. After all
this
 activity brings the population number of drivers each 5 years and even a boy about 15-16 years old can take
this
 exam test and drive for a long. I mean that the main disadvantage would be offended of driver who paid a lot for government and has more interests for car tricks at streets, especially, youngsters. In conclusion, human’s characters and knowledges will play the main role in
this
 way.
However
, it is more safety in multiplying numbers of retaking auto tests
such
 as during a short of period and I strongly believe that it will decrease the numbers of many accidents.
Submitted by Jamoliddin Abdurazakov on

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