One of your friend has asked you for a reference letter for the job as Sports instructor. Write a reference letter to Manager of the Sporting facility reccomending your friend. In your letter include What is your name and how do you know him/her What skills does your friend have Why he/she is suitable candidate for the position

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Dear Sir or Madam, I trust you are doing well.

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is a reference letter for one of the potential candidates for the position of Sporting Instructor at your recreational facility. First and foremost, My name is Ruchin

Patel

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and I have known Dhruvi

Patel

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for more than two decades now. Not only we are good neighbours but

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we attended school and college together. Dhruvi has exceptional communication, leadership

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interpersonal skills.

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, she has a technical knowledge of all the sports with a combined experience of three years.

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that, her can-do attitude has proven fruitful several times in her current position as a Senior Instructor where she started in a junior role and demonstrated excellent skills to make her way to a senior role.

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, I would highly recommend Dhruvi

Patel

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as a suitable candidate for the position of Sporting Instructor.

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but not least, I can certainly assure you that she will meet and exceed all your expectations undoubtedly. Please do not hesitate to ask any questions that you may have. Thank you. Sincerely, Ruchin

Patel

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ruchin27Fri Jan 17 2025

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Ensure to clearly outline your relationship with the candidate at the start of the letter.

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Maintain a logical flow of information for increased readability.

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The letter maintains a formal and respectful tone suitable for a professional reference letter.

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Each paragraph discusses a distinct aspect of the candidate's qualifications, skills, and suitability for the position, making it easy to follow.

coherence cohesion

Uses clear and effective transitions and structure, allowing the reader to track the main points effortlessly.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

182 words

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