Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Music
is the bridge which links the people of various
tradition
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traditions
and
age
together. I totally agree that
music
is
one
of the most effective tool to bring people closure to each other.
Firstly
,
music
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the music
has no
language
.
In other words
, to like
music
it is not important to be familiar with the
language
of the
song
. There are so many people all around the world who have started enjoying Indian
music
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music, although
although
they are not aware of the meaning of the
song
. I myself have experienced
this
when I was on a holiday on
cruise
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a cruise
where
one
of the singer seeing our group started singing
one
of the famous Hindi
song
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song, although
although
he was a Philippine and did not
understood
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understand
the meaning of the
song
.
Also
, nowadays there are many
inter-cultural
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intercultural
concerts taking place where singers of different region sing the songs in the
language
of the region to which they do not belong. So,
music
is what
one
feels and not necessary that
it’s
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
language
is understood.
Secondly
,
music
cannot be bound in the
age
barriers. People of different
age
enjoying listening to some of the evergreen musical
composition
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compositions
. In India it is seen frequently that 6-8 years children sing songs of
19th century
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the 19th century
to which their great
grand parents
a parent of your father or mother
grandparents
belong.
Also
, around the
world there
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world, there
are certain musicians which are heard by people belonging to all
age
groups.
Hence
music
has the power to unite different
age
groups together. To conclude,
music
is
one
of the vital link which has the power to unite the people of diverse traditions and
age
groups as it has no boundaries of
language
, religion,
age
or nationality.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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