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Some Companies have uniforms for their staff which must be worn all the time. What are the advantages for a company of having a uniform? Are there any benefits or drawbacks of having a uniform for the staff?

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Many companies make their employees wear a common
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 during their office hours. Implementing
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 practise enables the feeling of equality among all the workers and
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 it becomes a symbol of the company by which it can be easily differentiated from others. Sometimes the
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 protects the person from injuries. Uniforms are often used to make people working together feel that they all are equal. Just like schools which make students to wear
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 so that no one can feel inferior to someone wearing better clothes companies
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 use
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 for the same reason. Companies have their own uniforms for all of their staff members. Sometimes the group decides
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 wear on the basis of the employer's status. Like the workers who
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 on fields have a different reliable clothes than the staff member who have to
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 in offices. But their main aim is to develop a unique identity of their firm which helps in advertisement of the firm. There are certain jobs which require
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 as a precaution to prevent any fatal wounds during the
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.
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 the
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 serves as a shield for the worker. Usually people who have to
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 on field require
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 specialised uniforms.
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 the people working on construction sites or mining sites were a headgear eye protection shield etc. While a fireman has to wear thick rubber boots and gloves and face masks. To summarize, the use of a sensible orderly clothing is beneficial as increases the feeling of equality and sometimes becomes necessary for the protection purposes.
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 the use of
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 has been always
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