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Band 5.5

The system used for rubbish collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing Problems for you and your neighbors .

#system #rubbish #collection #area #neighbors
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Nowadays, many of the people are starting to concern about the environment. When talking about the environment, it is an essential to discuss about the recycling
rubbish
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. It is true that, any government in a country, should need to carry a proper plan towards
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collection
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 of
rubbish
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.
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, following
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 will reach to a proper conclusion.
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, I'll going to discuss about the several problems occurring through
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rubbish
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collection
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system
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. So, many of the people are now, consuming so many things even though many are not aware of
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.
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 happens, due to the technological advancements and complicated lifestyle has arisen in
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 world. In the meantime, people are using several things which can be recycled and non- recycling products. When talking about these non recycling products, it can be harmful to the environment and which are non as electronic devices, gadgets, polythene bags, plastic items and much more. When talking about the recycling
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, these are the one's that easily destroy and user friendly to the nature and which is known to produce a less environmental
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 and has a minimum impact
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on
 the nature.
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, when talking about the
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 of
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collection
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, it has to have a proper
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 it can threaten to the surrounded people and neighbours in the living areas which
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 can create several issues
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 as air
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, asthma, heart diseases and much more.
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, those responsible parties have to take the responsibility to the
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 departments to carry these systems appropriate ways and the effective manner
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 it can prevent many of the issues and will be helpful to avoid the environmental
pollution
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.
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 the authorities has a responsibility to the monitor and the review of the
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 departments, tasks so it ensures that everything will be going right. In conclusion, It can be said that, the responsible parties must need to raise their voice to create a correct
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 of
rubbish
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collection
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 prevents many of the problems and It
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 mainly help to avoid the environmental
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 in
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 world.
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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