Children are now less active in their free time than in the past. Therefore, sports lessons must be compulsory in schools. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that these days the children don’t play any activity now. The question is children are tired now. In
this
essay I’m going to discuss my opinion and draw my personal conclusion. In terms of positive side. Sports lessons are dangerous for children. The main reason given to support claim is that. Some activities are cause of injuries and problem for children. To illustrate, broke their
bones
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bones, such
such
as, wrist,
lags
staying power
legs
, hand, and knee.
In other words
, the children can’t practice a normal life.
However
, sports lessons in schools have positive
affects
property of a personal character that is portable but not used in business
effects
for children.
Firstly
,
body
for children will be healthy. Sports lessons are very important for their
body
because when children spend some hours for play activity they fill strong and very well.
Also
lessons activates are
prevent
Suggestion
preventing
many diseases
such
as, high blood pressure, diabetes, and obesity.
Secondly
, children can’t fill boring and tiered.
This
is because, sports activists are a major reason of active and move their
body
blood. In conclusion,
although
some people sea sports lessons are very important for children and
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
people believe
that is
don’t good idea.
Therefore
, I believe that sports lessons are very important for children because there can keep children active and healthy their
body
.
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