Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both view and give your opinion

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World population has increased dramatically over the
last
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few decades and industrialization caused major threats to flora and fauna. While some people argue that the mankind can do nothing to stop these changes, others believe that there are solutions to deal with
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problem.
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essay strongly agrees that governments and individuals, if acting together, have many ways to decrease the negative effect on the nature.
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with, one must admit that, unfortunately, wildlife in some regions has been irreversibly damaged due to
human’s
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human
activities.
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, in 2019, a United Nations study revealed that over 40 plant species and almost 10 mammal species lost their habitat and disappeared from our ecosystem forever. And even taking compensating measures like,
for example
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, closing factories or implementing forestation, cannot bring them back.
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,
such
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actions can lead to economic downturn and housing crisis due to unemployment and lack of places to live.
This
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fact clearly shows the depth of bad impact on wildlife and
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this
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cannot be seen as an excuse, but still makes the point.
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, I insist that both authorities and every person can take many measures to reduce their negative impact on
planet
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the planet
.
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of all, governments could introduce environmental laws to force the factories use more
eco
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Eco
friendly equipment. As well as implement extra taxes for fuel to encourage people drive less. These two measures will definitely have positive consequences for both humans and wildlife. Individuals, in their turn, could contribute to saving our planet by becoming more energy efficient, turning away from consumerism culture and using modern technologies for the sake of wild nature. To illustrate, paperless offices in Switzerland helped to cut down deforestation in the country by 10% within recent 2 years, and holographic zoos and circuses in Germany have already saved plenty of wild animals, leaving them in their biological habitats. To conclude, even though humanity has destroyed many plant and animal species and continues to put its own
wellbeing
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well being
before
nature
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nature's
wealth, still people can unite and do a lot to save and multiply what is left.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • negative impact
  • extinct
  • deforestation
  • pollution
  • habitat destruction
  • mitigate
  • reverse
  • stricter regulations
  • protected areas
  • endangered species
  • education and awareness campaigns
  • biodiversity
  • consequences
  • renewable energy sources
  • organic farming
  • eco-tourism
  • environmental regulations
  • sustainable practices
  • natural ecosystems
  • preserve biodiversity
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