In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
In some nations, people are getting heavier and standards of health and well-being are falling.
Thisessay will suggest that the principal cause of these issues is the type of nourishment they are eating and submit a government education program as a viable solution, followed by a reasoned conclusion. The main cause of the health crisis currently affecting so many individuals is over-consumption of poor quality sustenance. Convenience
suchas microwave dinners, chocolate bars, McDonald’s and pizza, have become a ubiquitous part of modern life. Eating too much of these high-fat meals causes many to gain weight and
thishas knock-on effects on someone’s general wellness.
For example, the movie ‘Super Size Me’ demonstrated that a person who eats
foodall the time will not only get
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suchthings as raised blood pressure and even fatty liver disease. The most practical solution to
thisproblem is a government-sponsored awareness campaign. An effective advertising campaign could warn of the dangers of a poor diet
and hopefully, raise awareness amongst the public.
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Thisraised awareness of the problem would lead many people starting a healthier regime.
For example, the U.K.
recentlylobbied their citizens to eat 5 pieces of fruit and vegetables a day and
thisresulted in a dramatic decrease in obesity-related illnesses
suchas stroke and heart disease. In summary, the current health crisis has been caused by an over-reliance on unhealthy
foodand states should curtail
thisby educating men and women on how to make healthier choices.
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