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A lot of people today move to other countries for their work. This has advantages and disadvantages for the children of such people. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion

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It has been observed from
last few years
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the last few years
 that many people
are migrated
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migrate
 from
there
of them or themselves
their
 own
country
 to another
country
 in terms of development and better lifestyle for their children’s.
it
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It
 is beneficial for the children’s for getting
better
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a better education
education
 with practical developmental techniques,
on the other hand
 they miss their
home land
the country where you were born
homeland
 and their ancestral families. Everything is depending on the peoples who are moving from developing nations to developed ones. Developed countries have better facilities like
education
, Health, infrastructure etc. Providing better future to the children’s one should move to other countries for
work
 and good lifestyle knowing what is not suited to them in their
home
country
. One of my friends moved to England with his family from India because of
healthy lifestyle
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a healthy lifestyle
 and better
education
 for their children’s because most of the world’s best universities are mostly in England, which is not supposed to be there in India. If ones can get an opportunity for working in other
countries it
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countries, it
 will be better and best for the children to learn new experiences and
cultural
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cultures
culture
 of the
country
. Most of the world best universities are situated there. Shifting to other countries, leaving everything in their
home
country
 like their own house, friends and families with
this
 situation sometimes children
becomes
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become
home
 sick and
moreover
 children’s face linguistic barriers which
is
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are
 inevitable to face with different cultures of the
country
. Previous year, one of my family members went to Germany for the
work
 for the betterment of their children’s
future but
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future, but
 unfortunately, they face many challenges in terms of society engagements and the cost of living is very expensive. One should move to another
country
 shall
closely
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close
 look into the depth of the other countries. People moving to other countries for their
work
, Only for better life and development of their children with better facilities. Which
is depend
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depends
 upon
country
 to
country
 by knowing all the facts and difficulties. One should move to other countries for
work
, which is beneficial for their children in terms of
education
 and future prospects.
Submitted by Lovish Bahree on

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