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Essay topics: Students in school and university learn far more by lessons with their teachers compared to other sources(example: television and internet). Do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, Students are learning everything from technology like television and the internet, but that learning method is not correct way I think. Teachers explain with examples and gives best suggestions. In
this
 essay we can discussion about students learning by teachers and technology learning.
First
, learning is an art that could not get from smart phones, iPads and television. Every teacher has selected by professionals they know how to teach and develop a good society with students. Today's students, tomorrow' citizens in the country. A teacher can sit beside of student understand their capability which is suitable to that student.
For example
: All students are not having same strength that could be different. Some persons have good at sports, some persons have another talent, too.Only teachers identified that than they encourage them.
In addition
, as a guider they have a friendly nature with learners if they struggle by any other. The internet can not give that support.
Second
, In
this
 trendy sector, Many kids are using Internet for doing assignments as well as find out everything what they want. Technology development is good that overcome the teaching methods that would be terrific on kids health.
For example
: Taking math kids are scientific calculating while they are doing math problems even small things that must not be good for their health. They forgot everything while habitat that calculation and getting radiation
also
 from electrical systems. I have to go with a conclusion, Students can learn from internet but a little bit of period, always they learn from
teacher
Suggestion
a teacher
 is the best ever and forever.
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