Now- a – days for many people the internet is replacing regular books. What do you think will happen in further and what is your opinion?

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Books are gradually becoming a thing of the past in recent times as modernization as taken over. Some,

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argue that print is still in vogue in certain circles and the internet is killing the sanctity of printed items. In my opinion, I believe that in the not-so distant future, there would be a

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decline of paper as we lean more into technology assisted learning. The internet with the help of innovation has brought information right to our fingertips and

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has been embraced by publishing houses to educational institutions. We see learning taking place on various technological platforms, replacing the need for jostling various paperbacks.

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, there has been a drastic decline in the traditional shops retailing paperbacks, with many stores closing down almost every other period. As with the rapid changes in technology and the need to keep up with information, the internet has provided an avenue to supply information right away to people without the need for printing and the hassle of carrying a book around.

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, there are still productions of traditional books, the production of e-copies compatible with different devices have been on the rise and I believe

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will continue to increase.

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, in recent times there has been the introduction of audio books, where authors read their works out for the audience to listen at their convenience.

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has proven to be a success as many authors have jumped on

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trend. In conclusion, modernization and innovation have found ways to replace the need for paper-bound through audio versions and device compatible options, I believe that

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is the future.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.5

Complete response

4.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

270 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

accessibility
democratizing education
digital formats
environmental impact
publishing industry
tactile experience
attention spans
augmented reality (AR)
virtual reality (VR)
innovations
vast array
resources
physical books
digital books
convenience

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Now- a – days for many people the internet is replacing regular books. What do you think will happen in further and what is your opinion?

Fully explain your ideas

Parents buy their children whatever they ask for, and allow their children to do whatever they want. Is this a good way to bring up children? What consequences could this way of parenting pose on children as they get older?

In many countries, the proportion of older people is steadily increasing. Does this trend have positive or negative effects on society？

Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and town, leaving only old people in the countryside. What problems are caused by this issue? What can be done to solve this situation?

In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?