task 2: in some countries, young people have become richer, healthier anf live longer, but they are less happy. What are the causes? What can be done to address this situation?

Recent years have witnessed the development of young generations with ever better qualities of life than those in the previous decades, youngsters are thought to have more happiness

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with being wealthier, healthier and having longer life expands.

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, the reality may show that they are less happy.

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be attributed to several factors, and

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to remedy the situation. Young

people

not feeling happier in spite of their

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possessions

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stem from 2 main reasons. Foremost among these is

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mental issues

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digital era, when innovations of technology and

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of social platforms have allowed users to

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to more online vocational training for free to update their knowledge and specific skills, or online recruitments

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the increase in population.

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applicants with outstanding skills but limited promotions, and in order to get employed, the young have to try even harder than

people

in the past.

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on social media, more and more

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use it as a showcase for what they have achieved, or in

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case, they can fake their achievements to get the

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from

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others. Take

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trend in Vietnam, for

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, when its initial aim is to motivate

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their goals, many have reported

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less satisfied with accomplishments

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their fear of missing out. So as to cope with the aforementioned

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, several following steps should be taken. The first solution could be

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government

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expansions

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of firms and the

establishments

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of more private businesses to create more jobs for

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youngsters, to ensure there are enough work positions and social welfare for them. Indeed,

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should

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intensify the importance of psychologists in assisting

people

to overcome their mental problems through consultants in

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the workplace

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or public workshops. The second solution, on an individual level, the young should build themselves

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confidence in their egos, which means to help them

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affected by pressures on social media. They can do

this

by reading self-help books

such

as “How to

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and

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” by Dale Carnegie -

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recommend, or by meditation as good. In conclusion, the

problem

people

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being less happy despite having better life qualities can

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from

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work pressure and fear of leaving behind.

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,

this

problem

is still positively soluble, but not without the aid from

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and

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of individuals to build a healthy mindset.