In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is, therefore, necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Nowadays due
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Nowadays, due
to the sudden rise in popularity and rapid expansion in fast
food
outlets, a vast majority of population across the globe, especially the teenagers
are struggling
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is struggling
with obesity and other weight related chronic
illnes
impairment of normal physiological function affecting part or all of an organism
illnesses
. Experts throughout both developing and developed nations believe that, in order to mitigate
this
issue, it is essential for the government to increase tariff upon the purchase of
such
food
. Personally, I do not advocate the presented view. In my opinion, spreading awareness among people regarding health and nutrition would be more beneficial. In
this
essay, I shall examine a number of studies to demonstrate points and
proove
be shown or be found to be
prove
proved
probe
arguments.
To begin
with, imposing higher tax rates on the fast
food
will only discourage people who belong to low
socio-economic
involving social as well as economic factors
socioeconomic
backgroung
a person's social heritage: previous experience or training
background
from purchasing it, but the tax could not prevent affluent customers from consuming junk beverages.
Therefore
, a significant part
of
Suggestion
Of
the society
willl
the capability of conscious choice and decision and intention
will
still continue to eat
such
food
items. That means the tariff on
convinence
the state of being suitable or opportune
convenience
food
will have marginal effect on its consumption.
Further
to
this
, the people will still continue to eat
such
food
because it is more convenient and can be cooked in a matter of a minute.
For instance
, a recent study published by the Oxford University illustrated that more that 87% of world's population prefer co
However
,
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