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Some think that quality art can be made by anyone while others think that it requires special talent and ability. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Art
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 is an important subject, people learn many things from
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. Some people believe that everyone can
design
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quality
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art
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 while others think that special abilities and skills are required to make it. Let us discuss both these statements for a better understanding.
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 with, Work of
art
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 can be made by anyone because nowadays, people are very smarter than before to copy any kind of
design
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.
This
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 is due to the Internet
technology which
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technology, which
 enable them to duplicate any
prizeful
serving as or indicating the existence of a purpose or goal
purposeful
 picture from different sources perfectly. These sources could be Google, chrome and so on. Sometimes, these arts have been
sold
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selling
 high prices without even knowing its
quality
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 work which is ignored by communities.
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, making a
quality
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design it’s
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design, it’s
 not difficult that’s why anyone can do it.
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, there are some important skills and abilities are required to make any good artwork. Making different colours by mixing others is not a kind of job for
anybody
a human being
someone
. Before doing that people learn by practicing them. Not only, practice is
required but
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required, but
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, past experiences are crucial to make a beautiful piece of
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. People learn many things through their many years of experiencing.
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 as, How to use panel and which pencil or colour is used to make
art
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.
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, Talents and abilities are important for artists. To conclude, After discussing both of views, I would like to see that people are able to make
quality
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art but
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art, but
, special talents and abilities are worthwhile for any
design
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 to make it perfect and valuable.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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