Wealthy countries should accept more refugees and provide them with basic assistance such as food and housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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There is a widespread assumption that in prosperous countries, accepting more immigrants and assisting them in meeting some vital
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viewpoint because
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secure refugees
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secure, refugees
from life-threatening situations, and it can
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boost a donor country’s
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down the line.
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, the safer a society is, the more people are likely to be protected from risky and dangerous situations,
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as wars and civil issues.
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is because, the people whose lives might have been torn apart with their homes having been bombed, they could face hunger, poverty or even death,
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immigrating to developed countries could give them a chance to continue their life life in a better and safer society.
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, the US government helps Ukrainians, who suffered during Maidan Revolution by providing them with homes and food, resulting in an enhancement of their living standards in comparison with those they might have had in their destination. Yet another reason to prioritize financing refugees for food and living is the consequent increase in the
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of their host countries.
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to say that, it is the immigration from the
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World countries that let refugees or immigrants exert their full effort in their professions and work for the developed countries selflessly in the long run.
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of that sort of
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operational approaches
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towards their work, a country’s
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may flourish significantly. To illustrate, having carried out research at Columbia University, scientists revealed that in Canada, in recent decades, have been opened thousands of new companies by ex-refugees, who used their
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and creativity in order to run their businesses, which, in turn, has developed the
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threefold. In conclusion, I think that any kind of aid to refugees is beneficial as these individuals, more often than not, not only can be integrated in a new society and be saved from any hazardous situations, that can be faced in their homelands, but they can
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utilize their skills and abilities for the development of a host country’s
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Refugees
  • Asylum seekers
  • Humanitarian aid
  • Integration
  • Multiculturalism
  • Economic impact
  • Public services
  • International law
  • Conventions relating to the status of refugees
  • Labor market
  • Cultural enrichment
  • Burden-sharing
  • Resettlement programs
  • Host country
  • Border security
  • Comprehensive policy
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