You share a parking area with several neighbors and have recently started having problems. Write a letter to be copied to all neighbors that share the parking area. In that letter • explaining the problems • suggesting ways to help the situation • proposing a possible meeting

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Dear neighbours, I am writing

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letter regarding the recent problems which happened in the parking.

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, one of you has

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the

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wrong parking of his

car

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this

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cause an accident with my

car

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, and

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cost me too much to repair it.

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, he has taken a place not only for one

car

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but

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for 3 cars.

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, I suggest that we will make the parking by personal card, and will give a specific space for each

car

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by number.

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, we will make cameras to monitor the parking and keep it safe.

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, if anyone

have

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a suggestion of

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problem please note it.

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, we need to make

meeting

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a meeting

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for all of us to discuss these solutions and to prevent any future problems. We can make

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meeting on the

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Friday 11 of May at 4 pm because all of us will be off of the work. I am waiting to

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from you Reda Ahmed

Submitted by reda on Sat Jun 20 2020

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

162 words

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