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You share a parking area with several neighbors and have recently started having problems. Write a letter to be copied to all neighbors that share the parking area. In that letter • explaining the problems • suggesting ways to help the situation • proposing a possible meeting

#area #neighbors #situation
Dear neighbours, I am writing
this
 letter regarding the recent problems which happened in the parking.
However
, one of you has
a
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 wrong parking of his
car
this
 cause an accident with my
car
, and
this
 cost me too much to repair it.
Also
, he has taken a place not only for one
car
 but
also
 for 3 cars.
Therefore
, I suggest that we will make the parking by personal card, and will give a specific space for each
car
 by number.
In addition
, we will make cameras to monitor the parking and keep it safe.
Moreover
, if anyone
have
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 a suggestion of
this
 problem please note it.
However
, we need to make
meeting
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a meeting
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 for all of us to discuss these solutions and to prevent any future problems. We can make
this
 meeting on the
next
 Friday 11 of May at 4 pm because all of us will be off of the work. I am waiting to
hearing
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 from you Reda Ahmed
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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