Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.

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Some people say advertisements encourage people to buy things they actually don'

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need, while some people argue that adverts give us more ideas about what to buy. In my opinion,

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they both are reasonable, I would agree with the positive aspect of adverts.

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of all, it's the human who decides what to buy other than the advertisements.

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, in TV, a new kind of cushion is trying to persuade audiences to believe that it could bring better sleep to us.

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, if sleepless doesn'

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bother me, I won'

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buy the pillow at all.

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, when new inventions come to the market, they do need some methods to let the mass know. Just like the padding in

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, somebody who has sleeping problems might be after these products like that. The pillow might be a great solution for them. While the positive points exist, I acknowledge that misleading in advertising exist as well. In order to sell more products, sellers sometimes do tricks. They lie that their products could meet our requirements, but indeed, the products don'

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work even a little. The cushion above again, it is possibly just as common as other ordinary pillows.

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, after customers bought

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kind of padding, they may never use them forever. Another reason makes people buy things they don'

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need is probably promotions. For examples, half price, buy one get another one free, etc. People would be attracted by the discounts. Above all, I reckon, unless misled by the dishonest advertise, people should keep aware of buying products they don'

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need. Human is smart enough to distinguish tricks and doing right things.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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275 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

encourage
persuade
manipulative
unnecessary
excessive
artificial needs
desires
consumers
oversaturation
impulse buying
financial problems
inform
educate
features
benefits
innovations
raise awareness
social issues
positive behavior
enrich
well-being

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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.

Fully explain your ideas

In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passenger. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

In the fiture, all cars, buses, and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages ?

Money spent on space exploration is a complete waste. Governments could better spend on other things benefit the nation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the modern world it is possible to shop, work and communicate with people via the internet and live without any face-to-face contact with others. Is it a positive or negative development in your opinion?

Write a letter to the hotel, making the arrangements. In your letter •tell them when you will be arriving and leaving •explain what type of rooms you would like, and ask how much the weekend will cost •ask about activities and places of interest near the hotel