A large company in your area has decided to spend a certain amount of money,either to sponsor a local children's sports team for two years,or to pay for two open concerts.It has asked for feedback from the general public. Write a letter to the company. In your letter .describe the benefits of sponsoring the the sports team .summarise the benefits of paying for the concerts .say how you think the company should spend the money

Dear Sir, I am writing to provide

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feedback about your

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's intention to either sponsor the under twelve sports

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for a duration of two years or pay for

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duration. There are numerous benefits of funding the kid's

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. One is the long term prestige it brings to the

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. Availability of these funds will enable our youngsters to train adequately and be better equipped to compete with other teams, leading to nationwide recognition to the sponsors of the

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. Another benefit is the indirect scholarships it provides. With the young

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competing well with others, members of our

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could be granted university scholarships.

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, two benefits of paying for

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are increased tourism and higher sales. Free

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in the city will attract more travellers to our city throughout the year, which will generate more revenue.

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, these

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will afford the

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audience for purchasing goods, leading to increased sales. I recommend that the

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finance the young people's sports

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because I think the benefits associated with it are long term. Yours faithfully, Ayoola Ogunleye

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Jun 20, 2020

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