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More and more people are opting for readymade ford intead of freshly home cooked food. Discuss advantageous and disadvantages?

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Nowadays, most of the young people are showing interest for online
food
 items Rather
then
 fresh home made
food
.
This
 is because of their busy schedule and lack of time for preparing
food
. In these scenarios, we have both pro's and cons, which we will discuss in
this
 essay.
Furthermore
, not only young people, many IT people are
also
 opting for ready-made
food
. Because, most of the people will live away from home, so, they have left with no other option
instead
 of ordering
food
 online. In my opinion, I would advise youngsters to prepare their
food
 at home
instead
 of ordering online. Because, not all restaurants will maintain the quality of the
food
. There are many online
third
 party platforms, which are linked to restaurants to delivery
food
 on-line. For these types of delivery, we cannot guarantee the same
food
 we ordered at the same time the quality as well.
On the other hand
, street
food
 is the booming business in which 50% of teenage women are attracted to it.
For example
, there is
food
Suggestion
a food
the food
 called
pani
a symptom of some physical hurt or disorder
pain
panic
pane
puri
Suggestion
Puri
 which is quite famous street eating
food
 in India, but the quality of the water they serve is ridiculous which in fact gives us many health issues. On the whole, the only one advantage of these ready-made
food
 is we can save time. Rest other is all disadvantages only. It will damage our health system and will lead to many heart and cancer diseases.
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