Currently there is a trend towards the use of conventional medicine. However at best these methods are ineffective and at worst they may be dangerous . To what extend do you agree or disagree with the statement?
The use of conventional medicine is popular mostly among the educated
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As a result
of global acceptance of western education, the use of conventional medicine has also
become a trend. The method has been considered as sometimes ineffective and at worst dangerous but
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dangerous, but
this
standpoint depends on the perspective of the speaker. This
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