Some people say that modern innovations bring a lot more problems than benefits? Do you agree?
It is thought by some that advanced development of technology and other inventions bring numerous serious issues in human being's
life
. However
, I absolutely disagree with this
opinion and consider that current progressive scientific advancement have tremendous benefits compared to any disadvantages.
To commence with, these days modern innovative
technologies made people's Accept comma addition
modern, innovative
life
extremely comfortable and efficient and I agree. In other words
, various electronic gadgets, instruments and other products, immensely advanced the way of living in productive manner
. Suggestion
a productive manner
For example
, long or short distance communication is remarkably convenient by the aid of high- tech mobile phones with considerable amout
of data, digital apps and other social media sites that allow people to call instantly anywhere in the a quantity of money
amount
world
. Along with this
, several household appliances like, oven, microwave, fridge, washing machine, dishwasher and others, have significant importance in daily routine as cooking, washing cloths and dishes and other everyday tasks are painless to accomplish in very less time. Furthermore
, travel arround
the in the area or vicinity
around
world
is becoming amzingly
accessible by people due to different innovative in an amazing manner; to everyone's surprise
amazingly
commute
services. Suggestion
commuter
For instance
, presently
, we can travel anywhere in the Suggestion
present
world
via aeroplanes, ships and ultra-fast trains but in earlier days, it was seriously difficult to commute from one place to other
because of no any of various alternatives; some other
another
such
availability of a wonderful super fast travelling modes
. Suggestion
mode
Moreover
, scientific extraordinary development and profound research in medical field
have Suggestion
the medical field
enormous contribution
in healthy living of human being. To illustrate, some awful diseases and health conditions Suggestion
an enormous contribution
such
as, cancer, diabetes, alzheimer's
disease, obesity and many other illnesses were affecting patients at a great a progressive form of presenile dementia that is similar to senile dementia except that it usually starts in the 40s or 50s; first symptoms are impaired memory which is followed by impaired thought and speech and finally complete helplessness
Alzheimer's
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extent, but
life
comfortably easier to live stressfree
by proper Suggestion
stress free
prevetion
, diagnosis and treatment of terrible ailments.
the act of preventing
prevention
In contrast
, some people think that modern advancement
of scientific inventions Suggestion
the modern advancement
have
adverse effect on society. One reason behind Suggestion
has
this
is that in this
modern digital world
, people specially
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people, especially
people especially
youngsters are
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youngsters, are
indulge
in digital media at a large extent that could affect their physical and mental health. Suggestion
indulging
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an example, adult people are using electronic devices like, mobile phones, laptops, Suggestion
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-pods and lots others for entertainment, daily work and other purposes that could eventually result in weak refers to the speaker or writer
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eye-sight
, headache, neck and spinal issues, obesity due to lack of exercise etc. Another negative aspect is that people are spending a good amount of time on social media and other networking sites that could affect their personal normal use of the faculty of vision
eyesight
relatioships
. a relation between people; ('relationship' is often used where 'relation' would serve, as in 'the relationship between inflation and unemployment', but the preferred usage of 'relationship' is for human relations or states of relatedness)
relationships
However
, these downsides are reversible and by changing personal habits, preferences and moderate use of digital technology could hugely benefits
the society in the positive way.
In conclusion, While people may vary in their opinion, I Suggestion
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scientice
technologies and various inventions, a distinctive odor that is pleasant
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ultimately improve
the human Accept comma addition
ultimately, improve
life
in various aspects as compare to any kind of drawbacks it might bring. Government should act conscientiously to make modern innovation a boon for the society and mitigate any atrocious effect by inforcing
strict laws and legislations.ensure observance of laws and rules
enforcing
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